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Fairy Operation

Fairy Operation
Submitted by Cherokee_girl on Wednesday, November 2, 2005 - 06:12

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Don't ask why I called it Fairy Operation but I did; it's just a temporary title.

This story is a fantasy romance, containing Magic, mythical people, and magical artifacts. I hope to finish this story, well book, by the end of 2006. I cannot garrentee it, but will do what I can. Any input on the part of readers around the world will be appriciated.

Some symbols used in this story may be confusing, so I'll explain what they will be used for.

"Quotations are pretty obvious, dialouge."

Words in Italics are thoughts.

-word enclosed by dashes are sounds that a character or characters may hear in the course of the story.-

Thank you very much,

CG



Subject: 
I think you frame the mood
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Author: 
zen
Date: 
Wed, 2005-11-02 22:30

I think you frame the mood very well.

Most of the authors write themselves into their writing. (so you must like watching the weather very much :) )


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Subject: 
Yep!
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Author: 
Cherokee_girl
Date: 
Thu, 2005-11-03 05:54

I do! I love the rain and snow when it falls. But I don't have a window seat or a back door. It was also raining when I began this story/book thing.

I'm trying to revise it everyday so if you go back and read it, everyday or almost everyday there will be something new.


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Subject: 
Changed
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Author: 
Cherokee_girl
Date: 
Tue, 2006-01-10 06:35

I changed this story quite a bit, but tell me what you think. I'm still working on it here at home, so we'll see how things go.


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Subject: 
Thanks!
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Author: 
Cherokee_girl
Date: 
Thu, 2006-02-02 20:34

I've started rewriting chapter 4. I didn't turn out quite right, so I have to fix it before I post it. Just be patient with me and enjoy what's here. I thank what readers I do have for making my story the Most Popular story of all time!Laughing I really appriciate it.

Thanks a lot to Zen especially for replying to my stories and helping me. Pimienta too. She reads the chapters as I finish them and tell me if anything needs tweaked (or completly changed as in Chapter 4).

Thanks you all!

CG


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