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the ride

the ride
Submitted by Pimienta on Thursday, August 24, 2006 - 10:09

it seemed so very easy to ride that day

I rode toward some one or someones so dear to me

It seems like forever since I saw them so I sped up. For many weeks I hadn't been able to bring my weary muscles to respond quite right but then I road like I was flying. Across the desert that didn't provide shade. There was nothing to keep me going only the hope of seeing them

 

I reached my end. There they were supposed to be. there was the dog still following me

then empty silence

desolate

I drag myself back to my bike and turn and go back. Riding back across the desert I feel the hot wind sucking the moisture from me. I hadn't noticed it before but now it was fierce. My legs would move like they should. I was once faster than the wind but now I couldn't even be sure I moved at all.

I didn't see anything around me. only silence.

 

I was alone once again



Subject: 
awesome writing as always
Author: 
hamster
Date: 
Tue, 2006-09-19 07:00

You write so descriptively, without it seeming to be overdone. Good job!


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Subject: 
thanks
Author: 
Pimienta
Date: 
Tue, 2006-09-19 16:46

thanks I was very sad

and it felt very much like I wrote it

and it actually helped to inpire a new story though I think I ought to finish typing the first one before I can get much further on the new one


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